Trying to figure out a graceful and interesting entry point into a story this week. I remember reading the advice that in general the first 10% of any story can be trimmed, as it's likely to be exposition--I can tell that's usually true with my stories, but it's hard advice to follow. The compromise I'm thinking of doing for this story is one I've seen often in pro comic books--a quick action scene that establishes the tension, and then moving back in time ("Twelve hours ago" or the comics standbys "earlier" or "yesterday") to where the setup is. Any of you ever do that in your stories? I don't often think to, but I usually like the effect.
How goes the writing week for all of you? I'm hoping everyone's inspired and productive, and if you are (or if you're blocked and need to vent) it would make my week brighter to hear about it!
How goes the writing week for all of you? I'm hoping everyone's inspired and productive, and if you are (or if you're blocked and need to vent) it would make my week brighter to hear about it!